Chocolate Case

I guess I wrote this in the past but can't be sure when...

I want to hide you in a chocolate case
To be happy every time I see you
even if I don't taste
You are just there, and I can feel the dopamine

I want to put you after the funniest song on the mixtape
To witness that I can be even happier
To remember that you can make me laugh

You are the Mona Lisa
in the Louvre for me
There are 35.000 arts there,
but you are the most requested
You give the most value to the museum.

My life was black and white before you
With you it feels like an animation.
You make me feel like a kid again.

Reviews

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

You spin a good disc in lyricism and stoic witty humor!
Your last sentence is enigmatic and challenges the theme of a one way growing up experience
but like Shakespeare says once again childhood visits in old age.
You give the most value to the museum...I wonder what...since its the most requested?
its a riddle a paradiddle an ephemeral note of music a bow without a fiddle?!
Wunderbar!

[Beren]

Awww, seems like you really understood this poem. Appreciate it so so much, a big thank you.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

You are very welcome...though Id really appreciate you explaining more about your poem

[Beren]

I mean... i don't know how to answer! But you can try to ask...

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

what did you mean by you are the most asked for thing at the museum?

[Beren]

I wanted to tell that I wanted him when there were so many other people. like the Mona Lisa painting, there are so many works in the Louvre museum, but most people who go there only to see the Mona Lisa. The person I wrote this poem for was the same for me.

Hope it is clear🌸

[Arundass TP]

Wow. An interesting poem revolving around you. Excellent writing

[Beren]

Thank you so much, I really care about your comment🌸

[Dylan Macadham]

haha, Past, Present and-or Future, a lovely Love Poem Beren :)

[Beren]

Thank you sir:)

[Relic]

I love chocolate. I also like the comparison you made and the relation to love. There will always be someone who we grow accostomed to, making our connection deeper and more meaningful.
I got that feeling out of this.

Nice writing, Beren.

[Beren]

Awww thank you so much! This means a lot! Glad you liked this one. Nice to meet you!