WORSHIP

WORSHIP

A Poem by Beren
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A song I wrote inspired by a game. We can play together!

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The madhouse where lovers dance on their first date
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane
 by those who could not hear the music
who heard the same song together were called lovers

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Holding my face in my hands and looking into your eyes that drive me crazy keeps me healthy
Before you, nothing has ever been this light and heavy
If the taste of cherries on your lips meets the wine in me, we can be the peaches whose ruined

If my worship is your game, your hell is summer to me
In your cage I feel more free
Than I could ever be in someone's sea
Without you girl in the mirror is just a she
One key opens one door, but one door can be open by many

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Holding my face in my hands and looking into your eyes that drive me crazy keeps me healthy
Before you, nothing has ever been this light and heavy
If the taste of cherries on your lips meets the wine in me, we can be the peaches whose ruined


Your existence makes me believe in God
if you need a prove i can drink your blood
love, live, read baby what do you want
I dedicate to you my life

© 2025 Beren


Author's Note

Beren
I was inspired by a game I played with my friend. We say a word and create a sentence starting with the letters of that word.

For example the word is LOVE

my sentence is
"L"ost "O"ctober's "Victim "E"nergy

And he choose the word "ibadet" which means "worship" in my language

My sentence was: "İ"lk "B"uluşmada "A"şıkların "D"ans "E"ttiği "T"ımarhane"
And that means

"The madhouse where lovers dance on their first date"

and Lana Del Rey has a lyric "My cherries and wine, rosemary and thyme
And all of my peaches are ruined"

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The third stanza amazes me...it is so graphic, I could taste the salt of the sea water.
j.

Posted 1 Week Ago


Beren

1 Week Ago

Thank you sir.
I am amazed English isn’t your primary language. It’s hard enough to write poetry in a native language. Bravo.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beren

1 Week Ago

Sir, I feel so lucky that you commented on my poem. Thank you. This made my day.
W. Barrett Munn

1 Week Ago

Your opening line is great/perfect.
Line 2: You could say:

The dancers were th.. read more
Beren

1 Week Ago

I will work on it! Thank you

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