passed

While I was writing poems, another night turned into morning

I didn't see but the night passed

Didn't even said goodbye

People will come into your life

And leave beautiful songs

They will also be the muse of beautiful poems

It will hurt a little but it will pass

Don't worry babe, that's a phase

Like a butterfly

Some people will stay just for a few days

And other kids will chase them

Seasons will pass and roads will be traveled

Love will be fallen and songs will be sung

Life will always find a way to stay in the right color

I can breathe easier now

Life will offer us a path

With the sun and the moon

Follow them

Reviews

[A.H.]

like the positive tone of the write.. there's always a positive side if we look for it, we get what we see. the last two stanzas are very true and I hear a philosophical voice here and this voice must be strengthened and followed...
"Seasons will pass and roads will be traveled
Love will be fallen and songs will be sung
Life will always find a way to stay in the right color"
very well written and expressed. thanks for sharing this write, Beren.

[Beren]

aww thank you so much! glad you liked this one, your comments are always matter to me! thank you for visiting

[A.H.]

you're welcome, my friend. take care.

[Costa Siwale]

I like how this poem carries a gentle, introspective tone, blending themes of transience, love, and acceptance. Of people coming and going, leaving behind beauty but also a touch of sorrow. Well done

[Beren]

Thank you for your time to read and comment, not my best job but glad you liked it!

[Costa Siwale]

I will surely check out your other work.

[Mk.t.g]

this felt like a poem to me, i will take it for myself, since i really need it
indeed, people really are just like the passing seasons or anything which happens momentarily, it is a fact to be accepted that the people you cherish may just be here for a temporary time, to add some flavor to your life, make it good or bad, and then leave, really, the people who are meant to leave have left already, and the ones who are meant to leave in the near future, will also leave too - someday.

but girllll, the poem was so good, i loved reading it, thanku for adding it honestly

[Beren]

Girl, please don't read my childish and hastily written poems, after yours, mine are for 6 year olds. i love you so so much and thank you for being here always for me!
Yes, people will come into our lives seasonally. There was a saying in a movie: You are a museum and some people will just look and leave, some will only tour the first floor, some will try to understand you, and some will never leave there." it was something like that.
I hope I can always understand you and always stay by your side. thank you

[Mk.t.g]

dont kid me, yours are so personal and vulnerable, i love reading your poems more than anyone's here, they're that special for me, also the saying/qoute is so sad, but so realll

thanku for being here

[Sami Khalil]

Show me the path
Give me the map
Share the instructions
Find out our destiny
Leave your legacy
Tread fate gently
Make room for new friends
Speak softly but carry a big stick

[Beren]

🥹🥹🥹 this is so good! Thank you sir!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome.