light of my life

For Ada, my sister.

light of my life

i would've drown the world in a single tear from you

in my hands my whole life blew and

you were the only one who was there

even though you were miles away

and it was more than anything

I love December only for you

Dressing simple only suits you

I know no man will ever be good enough

So I won't like anyone you bring home

I admire all of your friends

i hope all of them know that you are the best

I had no doubt that my life would be dark

if it weren't you in my life

You are the only leader I will follow without questioning

If you ever doubt yourself, remember

I just want to save the world for you

You will have heaven here 

and I will be the angel on the bridge

love you if i did not say

B always comes after A

Reviews

[A.H.]

such a beautiful sweet poem for your sister. she will be over the moon reading, definitely. you express your love for her and the bond so nicely. I have a little sister and I wrote a poem for her too long back, this reminded me of that :)

the last lines, very fine closing to this wonderful poem. I loved it!!!
"love you if i did not say
B always comes after A"

Thanks so much for sharing this endearing piece. IMO, one of your best piece of writing here!

[Beren]

aww thank you so much! she is actually not my real sister. she is my friend for 10 years i guess, and i don't have a sister but her. and her name starts with A so i chose that line hahaha.
Wow thank you so much. your comment really made me happy

[A.H.]

okay, it's still so sweet of you to do that for her.. you're always most welcome, my friend. keep it going!

[August]

This feels so warm and the last line! Clever, beren.. sisters are always special and the ones without blood relation even more to be cherished.. i love this, and keep writing..

[Beren]

Aww thank you so much!!! You are one of them, thank you for being so kind 🌸

[Michael Sun Bear]

I love the last four lines. You have written a beautiful, loving tribute to your sister. Well done.

[Beren]

Ah thank you so much! This really means a lot coming from you!

[ETERNITY]

What a great feeling a sister would have reading this!
My sister, not so much, lol, she hates poetry.
We still have a special relationship, though,
When she calls, "IT'S YOUR SISTER!" I know to pick up!
Sisters are forever. She always says "A kiss and a peck
And a great big hug around the neck!"
I loved this entire poem!

[Beren]

AWWWW THANK YOU SO MUCH!!! She is lucky to have you, I believe! Thank you so much for reading I am reaaaaallly glad you liked this one😭😭❤️‍🩹