temporary favors

temporary favors

A Poem by Beren

If you wish to be on my left side,
 I'll always be right

If you won't give me temporary favors,
 how will I know which wound I need to heal?

I can bear anything but 
   not the ice which made me accustomed to heat

I can take your pain into me
  but not what will come from you

I know you didn't promise me a flower garden
  We were born from water lilies in green waters

Tell me how many frogs should I kiss to get to the prince?
 While you told me i am the Queen

© 2025 Beren


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a very touching write. you're always the queen... nothing takes that away. love with no respect or heart is just like a flower with no scent. words and vows that are broken pain more than the pain itself. sincerely expressed with heart and emotions. thanks for writing and sharing. take care.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beren

1 Month Ago

"love with no respect or heart is just like a flower with no scent" use that sentence in a poem. kee.. read more
A.H.

1 Month Ago

yeah, I'll keep in mind :) thank you.


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a very touching write. you're always the queen... nothing takes that away. love with no respect or heart is just like a flower with no scent. words and vows that are broken pain more than the pain itself. sincerely expressed with heart and emotions. thanks for writing and sharing. take care.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beren

1 Month Ago

"love with no respect or heart is just like a flower with no scent" use that sentence in a poem. kee.. read more
A.H.

1 Month Ago

yeah, I'll keep in mind :) thank you.
fickle love hurts the worst...it should just happen, but if too many words, too many promises are spoken then broken.
The Queen will be kissing way too many frogs and the frogs will never find themselves turning into Kings.
This is so cool.
j.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beren

1 Month Ago

“ too many promises are spoken then broken.”
She wasn’t a real queen maybe, who knows?<.. read more

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Added on March 9, 2025
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