my guitar screamed a little

my guitar screamed a little

A Poem by Beren
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You make me feel at peace
I wear blue baggy jeans
And my friends says I look happy in it

I sleep with my phone
don't mind the undertone but
I will make you my own

wrote this with my guitar
and here you are the star
know, I won't be your scar

I'll take the long way road
To the Edinburgh
sorry this ain't my best ode

Souls had a deal
Babe, let's make it real
My words you to steal

© 2025 Beren


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dont know why, but i really felt this at a personal level, the rhymes made it so much more compact, loved reading it, as always girlie slays

Posted 1 Hour Ago


Fantastic work. I felt this.

Posted 16 Hours Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beren

16 Hours Ago

ah thank you much sir! i am grateful

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