slaughter

woke up and chose violence today

You haven't been loved enough to tell my honesty from flattery*

We both said  what we meant

You called me a clown

I called you a cruel

Don't worry, you're not the first man who’s afraid of love and runs away

I didn't leave the paints just because our colors didn’t fit

You are a poet who sees even Casablanca colorless

It's a perfect love movie

I'm sure you didn't understand

Do you still want my honesty?

Reviews

[Fabian G. Franklin]

An honest enemy is always to be preferred over a deceitful friend. But violence never solves anything. It can end life but cannot enrich it. Peace should be maintained even if it means walking away. If peace cannot be maintained then destruction of self or others is imminent.

[Beren Ongur]

This is a violence with my words. But you said great! Thank you for your time sir

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Peace is always preferable to death in my opinion. Violence leads ultimately to death. "Blessed are the peacemakers."

[Thomas W Case]

Powerful. I love the honesty and the heart of a poet.

[Beren Ongur]

Your words means a lot. Thank you for your visit, I am grateful.

[emmajoygreen]

An extraordinarily clear but tragic post, dear friend. Seems that arrogance and unkindness are unravelled in your words. There are far too many people who try to bend minds as if that was a right, a rule of play. It is NOT and you have made it clear that your life, your YOU and your being is what is your due throughout your life. Hooray and kudos for your first-class self defence. Always pride yourself in withstanding the would-be masters of Humankind - if they were wise, they would stay silent. What's the saying, 'Better be silent and thought a fool, than speak and be known as one! '

[Beren Ongur]

You are the woman I wanna be, wise! Thank you so much for your time, your comments are means a lot to me. Hope you are okay!

[emmajoygreen]

Same, hope you are okay. Hope nothing or nobody has ruffled your feathers. Are you alright, happy, etc. ?

[Beren Ongur]

I forgot that i should sleep, something kept me awake I believe. But I’m okay, BETTER WITH YOU

[emmajoygreen]

Yes, please try to sleep, listen to some gentle music perhaps? I sleep badly but do suggest you t ry to get into a good and logical routine. Try, please.(Am having a review thousands today will pop in to do two or three of yours!) :)

[A.H.]

impactful write., this comes off pretty hard .. honesty and flattery, clown, cruel, love and colors - lots to read here, packed and delivered with brutal feelings.

[Beren Ongur]

YEYY! good morning! thank you for your time to read and comment. these means a lot, you know that!

[A.H.]

good morning ! and most welcome, beren.

[I Shred This Cabbage]

Not leaving the paints because the colours didn’t blend is a powerful image. That really caught me off guard. There’s real poetry in those last lines. Maybe something to explore further!

[Beren Ongur]

Oh my god! Wow, you have no idea much I needed this!

Thank you so much for visiting, I feel flattered.

[Red Brick Keshner]

Power slam on the opening line! Curious to hear what the poem sounds like in your first language. 🙏🏻🕊

[Beren Ongur]

Ah that’s so nice! I write in English mostly, but I have just one in here that I wrote Turkish and still waiting for me to translate it 😬

Thank you for your interest.❤️

[Everett Dulin]

My favorite of yours. Very short and precise, but incredibly devastating.

[Beren Ongur]

Thank you. I mostly write short anymore.