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A Poem by Beren


Tobaccos between the pages knows that city is beautiful because of you

If Vincent Van Gogh could’ve seen your eyes, 

The Starry Night would be more blue 

Separation story inside the snow globe seems familiar 

French songs plays on the background were a cold killer.

© 2025 Beren


Author's Note

Beren
One of the poets who stands in the back as the face of the bookmark has a saying "This city is beautiful because of you".

Writers from left to right
Oguz Atay- Stefan Zweig- Nietzsche- Sylvia Plath- Cahit Zarifoglu- Nazim Hikmet

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Bittersweet memories fill this lovely piece...you touch on art, music and words that can hurt....this is the sad part...yet you mention Vincent Van Gogh, one of my favorites...with the same blue eye as your lost love...also somewhat sad...a reminder..the globe is perhaps a symbol of your parting....and lastly the French city of Paris and a French singer " This city is beautiful because of you", complimentary!
Nicely written
Warmly, B

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beren

1 Month Ago

Wow, you really captured everything what I meant! Thank you so much for your interest. I’m glad yo.. read more
Betty Hermelee

1 Month Ago

I loved it! A pleasure as always
Warmly, B



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Lovely, yet also somewhat sad poem.
Especially loved:
'If Vincent Van Gogh could’ve seen your eyes, 
The Starry Night would be more blue' beautifully written.
Yes, those songs are linked with your emotions like anger and sadness. Which makes you feel like you die inside while listening to it, especially when you are in a breakup or depression.
Makes me think of the song: Non je ne regrette rien by Edith Piaf.

P.S.: I have the same snow globe, only in a different colour...Lol.

Kendine iyi bak.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beren

1 Month Ago

I WAS TALKING ABOUT EDITH PIAF!
With the person I wrote this for Edith Piaf was our singer, a.. read more


You have a remarkable way with words & one day, I hope that you will realise it as much as your fan base already do .. Neville

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Month Ago


I'm sorry but I never make that kind of mistake
Beren

1 Month Ago

I knew that you are perfect!
Neville

1 Month Ago


No, I'm not & I know that .. but I am me .. and I know that too
"This city is beautiful because of you". when we feel beautiful, everything is "beautified and beatified."

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beren

1 Month Ago

Yes, thank you for your time!
A wonderful quote on the value of the city and its offerings from famous and much -admired artists and celebrities.
You and the city are becoming one.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beren

1 Month Ago

This is on your favorites? I guess God is sending me a gift because I remember the authors! Thank yo.. read more
Sami Khalil

1 Month Ago

You got it. You are welcome.

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