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Tobaccos between the pages knows that city is beautiful because of you

If Vincent Van Gogh could’ve seen your eyes, 

The Starry Night would be more blue 

Separation story inside the snow globe seems familiar 

French songs plays on the background were a cold killer.

Author's Note

One of the poets who stands in the back as the face of the bookmark has a saying "This city is beautiful because of you".

Writers from left to right
Oguz Atay- Stefan Zweig- Nietzsche- Sylvia Plath- Cahit Zarifoglu- Nazim Hikmet

Reviews

[Betty Hermelee]

Bittersweet memories fill this lovely piece...you touch on art, music and words that can hurt....this is the sad part...yet you mention Vincent Van Gogh, one of my favorites...with the same blue eye as your lost love...also somewhat sad...a reminder..the globe is perhaps a symbol of your parting....and lastly the French city of Paris and a French singer " This city is beautiful because of you", complimentary!
Nicely written
Warmly, B

[Beren]

Wow, you really captured everything what I meant! Thank you so much for your interest. I’m glad you liked this!

[Betty Hermelee]

I loved it! A pleasure as always
Warmly, B

[m_soulverses]

This poem beautifully intertwines love, art, and melancholy, creating a vivid emotional atmosphere. The reference to tobacco between pages and the imagery of a snow globe suggest a sense of nostalgia and longing. Comparing the subject's eyes to Van Gogh’s "Starry Night" adds a poetic, almost timeless quality, while the French songs evoke a bittersweet tone. The poem captures both the beauty and the pain of love, with the "cold killer" suggesting how memories and emotions can be haunting. It’s a short but impactful piece that lingers with the reader. Love your work :)

[Beren]

Awww... thank you so so much! I feel grateful for all of these comments! Glad you liked this one, i wrote this when i was 15-16ish, so this is a really important poem for me! Thank you again.

[m_soulverses]

You're welcome ! I'm 14 years old right now, I think you have a wide audience, people of different ages love your poems and I think that's something to be proud of ! :)

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Places, people, times, thoughts and emotions entwined. Very nice and emotive.

[Beren]

I am always pleased to see you here sir. Thank you

[Pete]

wow. very cool, clever. impressionistic. the arts speaking from the heart to the heart warts and all. well done.

[Beren]

Wow thank you so much sir! I wrote this when i was 16 or something, glad you liked this

[Efxaris Arampatzi]

This poem is full of meaning despite it's size. "If Vincent Van Gogh could've seen your eyes, the Starry Night would be more blue." Wow, this line is so powerful I am so shocked it's perfect!!! Forgive me but I am at a loss for words, this is truly a masterpiece! I don't even know what else to say!!! Well done my friend!

[Beren]

Oh thank you so much! i am really glad you liked this one. I LOVE YOUR POEMS! thank you thank you thank you

[Efxaris Arampatzi]

THANK YOU SO MUCHHH :D

[Martiya Daman]

This poem feels very dreamy and deep. I like how it talks about a city being beautiful because of someone. The part about Van Gogh and Starry Night is cool, like the eyes are even more special than the painting.

The snow globe and French songs make it feel kind of sad but in a nice way. It sounds really artistic and mysterious! Lovely work, Beren! Happy Tuesdays :)

Martiya

[Beren]

Ahh thank you so much Martiya.
I really care about your comments and this made me so happy!read moreAhh thank you so much Martiya.
I really care about your comments and this made me so happy!
Thank you for your time!

[A.H.]

the photo and the lines - they talk and emote here. books, writers, songs and music - that's certainly a way to set up the mood and be lost in background of thoughts. this write comes across as a reflection and time for self, there's a certain mood to this write and it speaks to you. thanks for sharing, Beren.

[Beren]

Yes, you are right! Thank you for your time to read and comment!

[Soren]

This poem with each line sets a mood and they then blend nicely. Loved it.

[Beren]

Thank you so much sir. Your comment means a lot to me!

[ashley]

OMG THAT VINCENT LINE IS SO GOOD HOLYYYYYY

[Beren]

You are the coolest person I’ve ever met. Shut up, You are holy!