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A Poem by Beren Ongur


Tobaccos between the pages knows that city is beautiful because of you

If Vincent Van Gogh could’ve seen your eyes, 

The Starry Night would be more blue 

Separation story inside the snow globe seems familiar 

French songs plays on the background were a cold killer.

© 2025 Beren Ongur


Author's Note

Beren Ongur
One of the poets who stands in the back as the face of the bookmark has a saying "This city is beautiful because of you".

Writers from left to right
Oguz Atay- Stefan Zweig- Nietzsche- Sylvia Plath- Cahit Zarifoglu- Nazim Hikmet

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the photo and the lines - they talk and emote here. books, writers, songs and music - that's certainly a way to set up the mood and be lost in background of thoughts. this write comes across as a reflection and time for self, there's a certain mood to this write and it speaks to you. thanks for sharing, Beren.

Posted 46 Minutes Ago


This poem with each line sets a mood and they then blend nicely. Loved it.

Posted 10 Hours Ago


OMG THAT VINCENT LINE IS SO GOOD HOLYYYYYY

Posted 10 Hours Ago


Lovely, yet also somewhat sad poem.
Especially loved:
'If Vincent Van Gogh could’ve seen your eyes, 
The Starry Night would be more blue' beautifully written.
Yes, those songs are linked with your emotions like anger and sadness. Which makes you feel like you die inside while listening to it, especially when you are in a breakup or depression.
Makes me think of the song: Non je ne regrette rien by Edith Piaf.

P.S.: I have the same snow globe, only in a different colour...Lol.

Kendine iyi bak.

Posted 11 Hours Ago




You have a remarkable way with words & one day, I hope that you will realise it as much as your fan base already do .. Neville

Posted 11 Hours Ago


"This city is beautiful because of you". when we feel beautiful, everything is "beautified and beatified."

Posted 17 Hours Ago


A wonderful quote on the value of the city and its offerings from famous and much -admired artists and celebrities.
You and the city are becoming one.

Posted 23 Hours Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beren Ongur

22 Hours Ago

This is on your favorites? I guess God is sending me a gift because I remember the authors! Thank yo.. read more
Sami Khalil

21 Hours Ago

You got it. You are welcome.

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Beren Ongur
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