5 poems / hidden songs

Still alive, killing time at the cemetery Never quite buried -TS-

we are having coffee in your car

on the beach and in the bar 

oh love

you kissed me in the graveyard

i was there barely alive

told me that would keep us apart

my dad and your mom are there

they said we made a good pair

i'll replace her and you'll replace my father

it's been 5 months but i still couldn't write 5 poems about to get over you

i never let you cry or go

deleted all the messages and that photo

you didn't even know i had taken

i still check your playlist

in case you confessed you missed me

in the hidden songs you liked

ive been dreaming a lot since july

you'll attend my bday and i wont cry

for the first time in my life

i thought i wouldn't be the fall guy

i know you'll go on military duty soon

i'll wait for your call before June

cause i packed my things to leave on the full moon

i stopped reading books, so you can't call me smart

you used to say i was too much for a guy like you

so i waited till you reached

you stayed there and never took a step

blamed me for all the things i had

in my past and everything else

i said i really need to get rest, in my head

you never called since we called it quits

my friends said you were in a funeral suit

i drank for my "first last time" there

i used some words just to hurt

i still wait for your apology

i cant see any excuse for what you did to me

i still care

i still care

i still care

its been 5 months but

i couldn't write

5 poems to get over you.

Author's Note

My ex asked me when we broke up "when will I be able to get over our relationship" and I said after writing 5 poems.

I still haven't finished those 5 poems
and today has full moon

Reviews

[emmajoygreen]

Life and time takes memories as a gift wrapped in very fragile tissue. Getting over certain happenings can leave so many emotions locked in time, tisn't easy to say goodbye. Your words inevitably leave a lasting wake behind it.. this is no exception. Sadly superb writing, Beren.

[Beren Ongur]

ahh Emma... you are right. even in a basic review comment you always choose to words in a holy way. you are such a poet and i love this.
i am so glad that you liked it. your thoughts are highly matter.
have a great day!

[red93]

So profound and complex B, beautifully put together. Really Excellent ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

[Neville]

This reads like both an autobiographical confessional and a lamentable mourning song .. I think it is a little bit special & the rough and raw edges help lift it into the light where it should be writefully read and likewise enjoyed .. Neville

[Beren Ongur]

thank you so much for reading and caring enough to review! i really care about your thoughts sir! i am grateful! hope you have a great day

[Cassie]

ohh wow, this is beatifully written. Reading good poetry warms my heart and thank you for sharing your beautiful poetry

[Beren Ongur]

ahhh i am so glad that you visited!!! thank you so much for being such a kind heart! hope you are doing well!

[Soren]

Sometimes it takes a fith to write a fifth. Some things we just don't get over. Thanks for sharing

[Beren Ongur]

:( i will get over... right? just not right now maybe...
thank you so much for reading sir!

[Everett Dulin]

Very personal, this one really hit me. A wonderful feeling for such a rainy day. A very quiet and somber plea.

[Beren Ongur]

i thought you liked it, and i am glad you did.
thank you so much for reading! your comments are always matter to me