Dear Daniel

Dear Daniel

A Poem by Beren Ongur
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It is written for fun as if singing in the C chord.

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Dear Daniel,
I called the lawyer
signed the divorce material.
Thought we had love. 
Thought you were done. 
Thought we could get along. 
But you saw me, with all my homies 
cursing your name all around. 
I hope you hate me. 
Don’t call me baby.
I won’t ever want one. 

Can’t you just get over it when my body is in his bed 
can’t you just have a little pride, my cheeks are turning red. 

Dear Daniel, you’re a liar. 
That’s what I told everybody 
You don’t treat me like I’m a lady 
Daniel that was the home's  key. 
You still want me, love is blindly, but you are not my cup of tea. 
Don’t switch the letters A n E (denial) (denial) (denial)

to the Daniel 
don’t call me lover, 
cause I have never been the one 
Let’s make a deal 
not for a cover, 
cause I’m not carrying YOUR son

© 2025 Beren Ongur


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this is like a song almost. you could beat your head to it with some rhythm. powerful expressions. the write comes off the page and hits hard. wonderfully written.

Posted 18 Hours Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beren Ongur

18 Hours Ago

yes these are lyrics :)
ah i love your comments!! means a lot, thank you so much for reading .. read more
A.H.

2 Hours Ago

You're very welcome, Beren.
More of that resent feeling, though a lot more forefront. Atleast you know they're thinking about you...

Posted 1 Day Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beren Ongur

1 Day Ago

Is it always a good thing that they are thinking of me?
Everett Dulin

1 Day Ago

Attention is attention, take it when you can
Beren Ongur

1 Day Ago

Right. Thank you for reading pal
WOW, this is one powerful write and straight to the point.
Powerful to the punch!

Posted 2 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beren Ongur

1 Day Ago

AWW. Thank you so much for taking time to read and comment! glad you liked it!

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Beren Ongur
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A Poem by Beren Ongur