exorcism

I miss the way I was before you
My innocent face in photos
Unkissed, untouched by you
I love my eyes that hasn't looked into your eyes
I love my hands didn't hold by yours
I want to be cleansed from you
Not enough to delete photos
Not enough to delete messages
I need an exorcism

Reviews

[A.H.]

we all need cleansing, time to time. but, love can hurt as much as it can heal. this is powerfully expressed write. this feeling of trying to unbecome, unseen, undo what happened is truly needed to start back on a clean slate. writing is a great outlet to emotions and hope this one made you feel lighter. thanks for sharing. wish you well, always - Abhi

[Beren Ongur]

Every time i write something new I feel like something bad left my body, i think we writers are lucky cause of that.
Thank you so much for taking time to read and comment, I appreciated it. I missed your reviews!!!

[A.H.]

you're most welcome! :)

[Betty Hermelee]

feelings of disappointment, perhaps retribution of sorts, certainly not a positive circumstance…….worded perfectly……i feel as if i’m that other person taking the punishment….stark and vivid
well written
warmly, B

[Beren Ongur]

This is so deep for me. Thank you so much, I really like your reviews on everybody. Thank you for your time

[Betty Hermelee]

you’re very welcome🌷
Warmly
B

[Soren]

You express that feeling that so many of us have at that point of a relationship when we are still held by what we know is too strong emotion. Very clever in the way it is set up and worded. Lovely

[Beren Ongur]

Ahh thank you so much, your comments are important to me. Have the best weekend