i love you but

What if you don't love me enough to make me love myself?

But no matter what 

I'll come home

I'll be in your arms

No matter how tired I am 

Even there are books for me to finish for other day 

I'll read while laying on your chest 

Would you accept? 

I swear I'll be your home to feel safe 

Even though i confuse what is day or night 

I'll be your daylight anytime you want 

Even though I fight with the moon in my mind

Author's Note

Can you make your relationship work when the people you love don't always fit your lifestyle and desires?

Reviews

[A.H.]

the title of the write drew me in..
This write read like a wish, a silent wish - penned with heart. liked reading it.
And would say, relationships are hard and it works both ways. so, if you don't see the effort from the other person, is it really worth it? I mean, just a thought. love is not to hold but to give, but it hurts if you don't receive any and that makes you think.
thanks for writing and sharing, my friend.

[Beren Ongur]

It didn’t worth it. I see. “ love is not to hold but to give” thank you for this!

read moreIt didn’t worth it. I see. “ love is not to hold but to give” thank you for this!

Thank you for your time to read and comment

[Lisasview]

Although this is not a poem I still did enjoy a glimpse into your life.
I am wondering if I can make a few suggestions to help with your writing?
If you are open to this then message me.
If not well that is okay.
Lisasview

[Beren Ongur]

i messaged you ma'm. thank you

[Everett Dulin]

Unfortunately sometimes people are too different or want different things. Never settle for anything less than your happiness. Focus on what you love and yourself, someone will come.

[Beren Ongur]

yes. you are right in every word, well that relationship ended but i didnt know these back then. lesson learned

[Tumi]

very very good, being real and sincere is the best part of a relationship
the poem was well narrated

[Beren Ongur]

thank you so much