i love you but

i love you but

A Chapter by Beren
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What if you don't love me enough to make me love myself?

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But no matter what 
I'll come home
I'll be in your arms
No matter how tired I am 
Even there are books for me to finish for other day 
I'll read while laying on your chest 
Would you accept? 
I swear I'll be your home to feel safe 
Even though i confuse what is day or night 
I'll be your daylight anytime you want 
Even though I fight with the moon in my mind


© 2025 Beren


Author's Note

Beren
Can you make your relationship work when the people you love don't always fit your lifestyle and desires?

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the title of the write drew me in..
This write read like a wish, a silent wish - penned with heart. liked reading it.
And would say, relationships are hard and it works both ways. so, if you don't see the effort from the other person, is it really worth it? I mean, just a thought. love is not to hold but to give, but it hurts if you don't receive any and that makes you think.
thanks for writing and sharing, my friend.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Beren

1 Month Ago

It didn’t worth it. I see. “ love is not to hold but to give” thank you for this!

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Although this is not a poem I still did enjoy a glimpse into your life.
I am wondering if I can make a few suggestions to help with your writing?
If you are open to this then message me.
If not well that is okay.
Lisasview

Posted 6 Months Ago


Beren

6 Months Ago

i messaged you ma'm. thank you
Unfortunately sometimes people are too different or want different things. Never settle for anything less than your happiness. Focus on what you love and yourself, someone will come.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Beren

6 Months Ago

yes. you are right in every word, well that relationship ended but i didnt know these back then. les.. read more
very very good, being real and sincere is the best part of a relationship
the poem was well narrated

Posted 6 Months Ago


Beren

6 Months Ago

thank you so much

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