satan's mom who believes in god

satan's mom who believes in god

A Poem by berenongur
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Do you know those families where everything is permissible for their sons but their daughters are not allowed to make a single mistake? i know too

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He can broke all the plates you couldn't even use for a big day
He can talk s**t to your lovely face
He can get a girl pregnant but never stay
What would you expect from someone who treats his mother like that anyway? 

He is the best son if he ever gets an A
But she is an evil if she refuse to pray
He can get anything without even play
But she have prices to pay
And there is a question I afraid to know
Would you still love your son,
if you were the Satan's mom who believes in God?

He can commit all the sins to go to hell
But if a girl wears a skirts that means she is into spell
When a woman can be saint, is it ever enough being well?

And there is a question i hate to ask
Would you still hate your daughter,
if she devote her life to church?
Or did she lost from the beginning with an extra letter "s"

They say unconditional love is a mother's love for her child, so what am i then?
Don't tell me problem is my personality, that would hurt more than a gender inequality.

But
Would you still love your daughter if you were the Satan's mom?

© 2024 berenongur


Author's Note

berenongur
The definition of the satan's mom who believes in God here is an exaggerated expression to explain that unconditional love is for children unconditional in all situations. It represents the intensity of feelings. I think it is the most appropriate expression to push the boundaries. Because religious people live to obey God's rules. But what if their "children they claim to love unconditionally" are enemies of their purpose in life? what if they are evil?

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Always be YOU! NEVER change to suit another person or to fulfill THEIR needs as your own needs MUST come first. We are all equal regardless of our colour, race, beliefs, religions. Only in this world is there a differentiation. If we all stood up and accounted for what we believe in, perhaps we could change the inequality, it would be worth a try at least. A finely penned poem, thought provoking and insightful. Thank you for sharing, Berenongur...

Posted 2 Months Ago


berenongur

2 Months Ago

When you are just starting to discover your identity, if the place you are in gives you a mold of wh.. read more
Marie

2 Months Ago

Thank you, dear Berenongur, I too, wish you the same...
In regards to religion, the world is just full of people who bend God's words to suit themselves. Hypocrites, they are. Also, there are cultures who place male children on pedestals while paying little attention to the girls. (Hispanics are one) It isn't right, of course. Some old traditions are good, but others stink like a dead fish. If determined enough, we can right the wrongs. My advice is to be yourself, carry on, and know that you're as good as anyone, no matter the gender.

Posted 3 Months Ago


so many question asked
so the reader is left alone to think and reminisce you words
a very good writing

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

berenongur

4 Months Ago

It was a very vulnerable poem personally so your comment is very valuable, thank you.

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Added on July 29, 2024
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