sunhopes

I am that girl who believes that everything will be better -even though it is obvious that its not- when spring comes and the sun comes out, and one day, on such a day, I wrote this poem.

was crying on the road now im feeling better

bet he still read the letter i wrote

woke up in the same time but i didnt even hunger

feed some cats and dogs like they are my brother

oh now im feeling better

cause life didnt stop when i had some hater

bet he still use the cup i bought him on his birthday

i cant even remember was it on May

i couldve find if i read the old messages

but i cant even stand well wishes

wore black and suddenly all animals loved me

i was feeling all alone but he didnt want me

my dad is under the earth and no one ever told me

that someday suddenly all people i love leave

now im feeling better cause there is always hope

and the life didnt stop when i lost them all

i kinda try to run i need to hide sometimes

but if you wanna make a change

you have to be on sight

now im working and i love spring more than anything

hope it will help me to carry all things im carrying

cause lately mom doesnt love me

and i need everything

Reviews

[A.H.]

this is such a heart pouring of a poem. I like the sincerity, the words and the emotions that come across so purely. What is it, if we didn't have a heart, that didn't learn to live and let live when it wasn't all rosy. Life moves on. As we grow, we come across so many experiences that shape us into what we are today. I can sense some outpouring of yesteryears and a homecoming. love and care are the most precious. The last few lines of the poem are melancholic but the poem talks of hope against the hope. thanks for sharing, berenongur.

[Beren]

Your words are always matter, and means a lot. Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts. Forever grateful

[Einstein Noodle]

"...if you wanna make a change
you have to be on sight"
i love those lines ... and the earthy honesty of your poem is a delight .. even tho the expression is sorrow, pain, loss ... yet hope ... thanks for sharing!
E.

[Beren]

This is a bit childish but I like it, so i am more pleased that you liked this too. thanks

[Einstein Noodle]

not childish at all ... a connection ;)

[Chris Shaw]

Such sadness in this poem Beren, moved me. When everything has gone pear shaped and the losses seem to take over, yet still you struggle to find that glint of light. You show strength here in a world gone dark. And I have always found animals to be the finest of friends when the human species falls short. Wishing you better days.

Chris

[Beren]

Thank you for your time. I really liked your last sentence, you are absolutely right! Glad you like this

[Martiya Daman]

I really like this poem because it talks about feelings of sadness and hope. It shows how even when life is tough, we can keep going.

The words feel real, and I can relate to how you feel. It’s a nice reminder that life moves forward, even when we’re facing challenges.

Martiya

[Beren]

ahh i love you so much sister! thank you for your time to read and comment! you always understand me very well. i am so glad you like this! THANK YOU

[Martiya Daman]

Your welcome!