win is a win

your closest one can become your worst enemy, an enemy with whom you experience everything and who is as close as your breath.

I didn't mean to love and lose

Now you are just a pair of shoes

in my home

Close the curtains and leave the burdens

Now you are in one of your versions

in my loam

Where were you when i was crying under a wreck

They all told me from my back that you were the one who broke my neck to death

Now i see you everywhere because you are sitting right there to see me

if i ever lose my breath

I'm regret everytime for the times i let you climb to my mind

I'm trying to feel fine but you keep bringing me the wine

I don't wanna feel the wind, anymore

Still waiting for your message

So i could send you all the passage i wrote

for last one year

now im thinking start to smoke

then maybe i should have to woke for my beer with my tear

Feeling bad enough to write again

thank god im not your wife, amen

I can't even stop my brain when the words are coming with a train

which is blue

i knew

that you were just a stupid lover

you used these words just to cover for the run, run too far

i meant the colors ive been talking but you were deaf

and you will never laugh in green neon bar again

you will never dance in new years eve with one of my songs and

if i'll ever have a son, i know how not to raise now

i guess win is a win

Author's Note

English is not my native language so please inform me of any mistakes and, i would like to hear about your ideas about my writing. have a lovely day

Reviews

[Diamond _writes]

This is beautiful. It would have been more better if some lines were painted on a canvass of romance

[berenongur]

thank you for your comment. i will try my best, and i hope you will like my other writings too. have an amazing day

[Marie]

An emotive poem, well expressed and finely penned. Thank you for sharing...

[berenongur]

Thank you so much, it really means a lot. Love your work

[Marie]

Gratitude with beautiful blessings your way, dear poetess...

[Victoria_mockingbird]

This is so expressive! So many emotions put in beautiful words! Here's my advice: use a free online grammar checker whenever in doubt. But so far, your English is actually pretty good!

[berenongur]

thank you so much for reading and paying attention.