whiff

after all the nights i wasted

all the birthdays i hated

there is just one who fainted with that whiff

all the lies ive been telling

was just preparing my ending

and they never liked my breathing

in the doors i used to close

there is my blooded rose

who smells them, who knows

things i used to do for fun

felt like made me just a none

i can't wait for the sun anymore

"If you're not going to get your life together,

you need to leave this house"

I've fallen on the same roads before

but at least now there's no one to push

Now I cook my own food, I sew my own wound

has they ever found a cure for that?

I've fought the same foes before,

but they were more cruel yesterday

Now my words are sharper, cause they shot the archer

but who's going to pay my debt?

Reviews

[Abhilash Hegde]

it reads like the author has bitter-sweet memories with kith and kin. the good memories, not so good ones, failed connections, some disappointments, some expectations all come together in this write. the way poems starts with some disappointments and ends in solitude and questions. I like the way it read and takes the reader to ponder more about the situation. Thanks for sharing, berenongur.

[berenongur]

Oh dear thank you so much, It is very meaningful for someone to thank me for my writing when I am someone who feels that such.

[Abhilash Hegde]

you're very welcome :)