I can cry,
I can speak,
as much I breath ...
I can't ask,
I can't forgive,
as much I breath ...
I can hurt,
I can deny,
as much I breath ...
I can't dream,
I can't love,
as much I breath ...
I felt something pretty cool while reading this, it's almost like a spiritual, emotion thrived poem and I really enjoyed it:-):-
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Am happy you loved it .... It was a time I was going through the same .. And finally I had the cour.. read moreAm happy you loved it .... It was a time I was going through the same .. And finally I had the courage to let it out ....
Hi Dear Aurth. Am I wrong in believing this a poem of symbolism rather that actuality?? I get that you are in a reflective mood and balancing the emotions. An honest inner view of yourself, alf
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Nope this is not me at all ... Its just clicked to me .... The line 'as much as I breath' made me th.. read moreNope this is not me at all ... Its just clicked to me .... The line 'as much as I breath' made me think .... Its a hyperbole ... Figure of speech ...
Forgiveness is the key to happiness if we don't forgive then don't expect God to forgive you either
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Yes you are right .... That's the spiritual aspect .... Here it might be different ... its about wha.. read moreYes you are right .... That's the spiritual aspect .... Here it might be different ... its about what can't be done as much times one breaths ... Kind of hyperbolic statement