The Smile

As you asked for .....

Eyes that met 'the one' of his fate
Stayed afar far for that day
To say Hi, hello how's your day?
Waited for perfect time perfect date
For she will smile first time
As she hears his name

Tense captured your smile
Tender wrinkles arise
Its for the tough times
Tense captures all our good times

A Dew happens for a while
A flower bloomed today
Will make thousand worries aside
Such is the serenity of your smile
Happens for a while
Unfolds worries inside

Day starts by missing her
Messed by me in every sense
Distance, time away are inevitable
Insecurities, fight are guest to share table
Know that my suitcase is packed
For our journey of extra mile

With you I saw little things
Love knotted by bits and pieces
Like the first tea you made
I never had
Like the first cake I made
You never had
Our first meet
After months apart
Our first date and
Your hot green dress
Did you smile reading this?
Tense captured your smile
Tender wrinkles arise
Its for the tough times
Tense captures all our good times.
Love you, as you asked
I gave you The Smile.

Reviews

[Maumil Mehraj]

Very deep and beautiful.
A lovely love poem!
Maumil

[Dear Aurth,]

Am happy you liked it ... Its personal one like 'First Love' I wrote ....

[Pushkar Prabhat]

very passionate emotional and personal poem.....
lovely flow....
sincere writing....
i loved it!!!
:)

[Dear Aurth,]

Hehehe .... My inspiration is always with me ...

[alf]

Hi Dear Aurth. Wow, this comes from deep inside. It flows onto the page and gives so out much emotion.
Passion and love, though from afar, are such reality in life and this was such a joy to read, alf

[Dear Aurth,]

Yep its personal .... The beginning of little things :)

[alf]

Keep on writing, my friend!!!