Your are... never back

The relic concept helped me to complete it ....

You are the one whom I love
You are the one for I cry
When all my tears dry up
You are the one never back

Love began with
I love you in her eyes
Now its into a phase
Interrogate my day's
What use is relic heart?
Kept in safe for what !

You are the one whom I love
You are the one for I cry
When all my tears dry up
You are the one never back

Denial in me
Whispered to me
Lost doesn't last lifetime
Every ends leads beginning
Scars are bandaid
by me or Someone meant to be mine
What use is frail heart?
You'll lose heart, mind, body and soul

I am afraid, I won't speak
I won't love, I won't seek
I won't hate love
I won't love hate
When all my tears dry up
You are the one never back, never back.

Reviews

[alf]

Hi Dear Aurth. What an emotional write this is. I can feel the frustration, the lack of understanding, a whole heap of feelings as they come flooding into your mind . . . until . . . finally comes acceptance. In that acceptance, you are determined you will not harbour resentment. beautifully written and a pleasure to read, alf

[Dear Aurth,]

Am so happy you took time and reviewed my writing .... Its a journey personaly this and 'phantom pain' I wrote it with my inner experience as I finished I just plondered back to realize am in tears .... So happy to know you loved it ... It means a lot to me as an ameture .... I'll pray to be better ... Hugs ...

[Pushkar Prabhat]

amazing write........
love could last a lifetime though, true love!
skillfully crafted this one.........
really what good is a weak frail and relic heart.......

i love the use of "you are the one never back".......last list nails it!!!
enjoyed your torment my friend!!!
i loved it!!!
:)

[Dear Aurth,]

I gave the title based on first and last two words. Am overwhelming to know that's as a reader relating to the writer portraits

[Pushkar Prabhat]

yep........it is fantastic!!! :) :)

[Dear Aurth,]

*its insted of am ... :/

[Pushkar Prabhat]

no worries.......i got that perfectly.......!!! :) :)