Memories

The memories,

Make them stop

It makes heartbreak that much worse.

They take you, your heart, your mind on a trip.

In this case, it's not what I want.

 

The memories,

They will never stop.

They tear me apart.

Never ceasing pain, heartbreak, regret.

In this case, it's not what I want.

Reviews

[Jay. E. V.]

you use the element of repitition here, which is excellent, but for a piece this short. Definitely need some stronger diction=). Get a thesaurus and get soem synonyms for some of the different words and play with it a bit. =)

[Lost in Wonderland]

So true and so utterly sad