THIS IS WAR

THIS IS WAR

A Poem by bellastella
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The war of the small children.

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You’re wrong

you’re stupid

I HATE you

AHHH!!! (shock)

black eye

pulled hair

missing teeth

spitt in the face

kick

punch

slap

gut

shins

ugh… (heavy breathing)

ow.. uuuhhhh…

-groan-

this means

NAPTIME!!!

© 2008 bellastella


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No way you'll lose your reader! The lines move the eyes along.

Sal

Posted 16 Years Ago


Haha, very nicely done! I could just imagine two toddlers facing off.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on December 2, 2008

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