If i could freeze time

If time could stand still, I’d freeze it here,
So you’d always hold me, close and near.
In your arms, where I’m meant to be,
Filled with the perfect love you’ve given me.

A bond so strong, a hold so tight,
To know you’re the one; my ‘Mr. Right’.
A blessing sent from up above,
In you I’ve found my one true love.

Our lives entwined to be as one,
Upon this journey we’ve just begun.
Where you and I will find no less,
Than eternal love and happiness.

Reviews

[poetic soul]

the way it ended sounded like some "lived happily ever after" fairy tale that never comes true! but how i wish, it happens more often in reality.. good luck to you... :) nice poem!!

Regards,
Poetic Soul

[Poeticpiers]

Simple straight forward and to the point May it long continue to be so

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hehehe

here's Mr. Right again .. seems Mrs. Right is in love lolol

we all wish we could freeze time .. and sometimes we wish to go back into the past to change things
so live your present as you wish

beautiful piece (: