love the way you lie

I love the way you lie

you love to see me burn

you love to see me cry

you stand here to watch me break and die

and yet I still love the way you lie    

Author's Note

please don't judge

Reviews

[Valkyrie Warrior]

This is lovely and there is nothing to judge about except it's brilliance, pen on.

[Wolven]

Short and sweet. It hits home pretty hard, and has a sort of musical quality to it.
Very nicely Done. :)
Would love to read more of your work. :)

[Peacegal]

Beautiful and strong words,all five lines of them!! Love it:)

[love the way you lie]

thanks I really like what you said about my poem

[Peacegal]

Your welcome:)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Indeed, we all need those delicate lies in life just to get through sometimes!

[love the way you lie]

I think its true too

[MomzillaNC]

Don't we all sometimes end up with that beautiful liar… their lies paint such happy pictures, such bright never futures.

Keep writing. This was a strong start.

[love the way you lie]

thanks a bunch tell your friends to review and comment I will be back to check this tommorrow

[MomzillaNC]

I'm sorry. I don't send read requests on the behalf of others. But, I find that when one person posts a review or a poem, that activity on the feed draws me to their pages. You keep posting works and when you've got a body of work, you'll find that people start sending you friend requests too. It might take a few days or a week, but you'll get there. And, nearly everyone you review will go to your pages to review your work as well. It's an exchange. You might also try reading some of the review of other folks work, and, if you're inspired by their commentary, include a comment of your own in that review exchange.