The power of these Words

I'm not sure

1. The power of these words are indiscriminate. 3. What is why that is nothing if not given? 8. There are these things that terrorize me in the night. 11. I am afraid, senseless to my actions while trying to be better than what I am. 15. I know who I should be, I am concerned for whom I am. 19. The power of these words are indiscriminate. 19. Why not live how I should be? 22. Take action and be proud, I am who I should be. 24. This is what I make of it, I am not afraid. 25. The power of these words are indiscriminate. 27.

Reviews

[Karmee]

different but not bad, very clever. Enjoyable

[Damien Ridge]

Very unique and interesting way of writing. Are the numbers parts of a list, or ages? Thanks for sharing!

[bellaayden]

Thankyou for the review Damien. Its been a struggle for me to try and make the decision to make a post somewhere. I find that I am constantly reviewing my work after each small part to see if the phrase is taking my writing in the direction I want it to go. I suppose I will just let that be a clue to the numbering !

[Damien Ridge]

Perfect, thanks for replying. Look forward to more!