Waiting

A poem

When I first laid eyes on you
My heart skipped
My pulse got faster
I wanted to meet you
My fingers itched to wave to you
My mouth twitched to say hello to you
My feet squirmed to walk over to you
I stood sill waiting for you to notice me
Waiting for you to wave to me
Waiting for you to say hello to me
Waiting for you to walk over to me
Waiting for you to stand still waiting for me to notice you
Finally our eyes met
I felt like I would faint
But I stood there like a statue
Just waiting
You took a step
I took a step
We repeated our actions until we could feel each others breath
We circled each other
It was like a delicate dance
Then before I could someone swooped in and took him
I never saw him again

Reviews

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I love this Regs

[Karina]

Nice job, Regan! Again, sad at the end, and happy at the beginning, but amazingly written(:

[MitchNephets]

This is really nice and sweet! Well done! One little thing though, in the 8th line you should have put 'still' instead you put 'sill'. I really enjoyed reading this, keep up the good work. :D