Prequel

This is just the little teaser for the rest of the book.

            There it was again, the slightly dull and tingly feeling followed by a blast of pain that cannot be replicated. It was a mixture of  physical contact and feeling the loss of love. Together it creates a dangerous concoction that you wouldn’t even wish on your worst enemy.

            And what is the most horrendous part of it all? Everything is only your fault. Every stinging degree of fire worthy pain is all because of you. No one should have to feel this. No one should be shamed in such a way. Especially not a girl by the name of Delilah Marie Jasper.

            She was as sweet as they come. The only girl at her high school not to laugh at cyber bullying or partake in more than questionable pastimes outside of her schoolwork. Most of her days were spent reading. Any material you put in front of her was immediately a book worthy of her attention. No author was safe from her curious brown eyes or ever-growing brain.

            So this is the story of Delilah. It’s partially a story of love and heartbreak, but most of all it’s the tale of a girl finding her way through life. 

Author's Note

Tell me as much as you can! I'm not really sure how to word this prequel, but I think it turned out alright. I use that word lightly.

Reviews

[Justme0786]

I like the fact that you gave us a teaser! I can't wait to her more. I think it would have been better if you eased us more into it before you jumped into whatever you were talking about. Spacing could have been improved. It would make it easier to read and it would look more visually pleasing. Even so, description was great, and I can't wait to read more!

[belisa]

thanks! I didn't know there was a way to change the spacing on the website, but I'll work on it :)

[Elizabeth Grey]

I'm interested to read the story, but I'm wondering if you need a prequel at all. Here, you're telling us what is going to happen. Instead of telling us, just go straight in and SHOW us through dialogue and Delilah's thoughts / actions. Just an idea! :) xx