Surfacing

Complications of the flesh,

I know you  want to feel the fold,

Sense the curves,

And discover the sour of my comp lection.

Penetrate

The problems that plague us away .

Skin slides better when I’m the one moving,

Feeling  lighter than usual,

I know you prefer me on you.

Reviews

[Tai Ryens]

This can have different meanings, and I'm not sure which meaning you were going for. There's a erotic version I have in mind, and there's a "perfect under the stars moment with your lover" kind of version I have in mind. Regardless of which one it is, you've done a good job depicting a good image. Keep it up!