No Time For Waiting

No Time For Waiting

A Poem by May West
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Plans deferred . Stop the words and put that plan into action. want to do it while being stagnant. Life is too short. Do it now.

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The Bahamas, Paris, Egypt.
You told me you were going.
A decade ago

Still you are here
Going Crazy out of your mind
Are you destined to be here 
You have to get out of here
There is no time to wait. 

Envision The Buckingham Palace
Proudly being on the grounds of Africa
Walking along the Great Wall of China
You told me that you were going
But you are still here 
There is no time to wait
In a world filled with amazement.
Many good friends have passed you by
Hoping that you would say yes
Share a moment of wonder with them.
There is no time to wait.

Is your mind telling you
I am enmeshed in this place
 I have to go get out of here. 
There is no time for waiting. 
What are you waiting for.  

© 2015 May West


Author's Note

May West
I am open to suggestions on how to make this better or any comments.

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Getting out into the world make you learn more. Interesting poem

Posted 9 Years Ago


If you don't get out there and see what the world has to offer, you'll never know. Well written!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

May West

9 Years Ago

Thanks. In life we need to get out and explore. See new things. Even if it's in your own town.
This is a beautiful piece. The urgency to travel and explore the world is expressed nicely. My travelling days are behind me, but I once had just such an urgency to travel. Great poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rajah de AzinPrinz PhyberDragon

9 Years Ago

Some good practice would be to find a small paragraph you like and rewrite it with rhyme and measure.. read more
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May West

9 Years Ago

Thank you that is very helpful.

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Auburn , AL



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