Failure

Just a poem on how i felt this last weeks :D

Stupid and angry is what I feel,

I dont know what I did or what's the deal.

It was my fault, there's no one to blame,

All the small mistakes I did brought me to shame.

Failure is what I am,Who can I blame?

It was my fault, Im the cause.

Not listening to people ,and doing my way, brought me to nothing.

Failure,stupidity,anger, is my result.

But ,you learn from your mistakes, and thats what im going to do,

learn from my failure, and bring me to the better.Myself

Reviews

[youngwriter222]

this poem explains how people can look at themselves as not being good at anything. This is an excellent poem, keep working. I think everyone should read this

[BL00DY-K1TTEN]

this poem is very inspiring and truthful. its true alot of people feel like doing what they want. sometimes the outcome isnt so great either, the myself and then crossing it out part really hits you. great job belen/ keep it up and janisa add me gosh lol i dont think she knows its me haha

[DR3AM3R]

TO ME THIS IS THE BEST ONE OF ALL THE ONES YOUV'E DONE...IS THIS THE MOST RECEENT? CUZ UR REALLY IMPROVING IF IT IS