Rain Drops

Rain Drops Story

rain

drops fell

down inside

the flowers heart

which is dark deep.

landed on a leaf tip

glistening when

sun peeked out

through the

falling

rain

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Karmee]

I love the shape of this write, this is very good

[Cherrie Palmer]

I like how you shaped this poem as a rain drop and your poem is beautiful

[¿]

Am a lover of such creative poems these days! It feels great when it reads smoothly with a true meaning and a satisfying shape alongside...I know you've given your best in it....Thanks for sharing :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Gentle, wonderful and true words written. I did like the poem. Thank you bela for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[An owl on the moon]

What a beautiful flow of a story, of rain singing over the earth. The form is perfection.

[emmajoy]

Beautifully created design, bela, and, also, contains such graphic moments in time. Thank you so much for sharing your skills.

[wordman]

nice imagery,nice form great write ..

[bela]

Thank you for reading. I am glad that you like my poem

[wordman]

you`re welcome,it is unique

[bela]

Thank you Tazeen for the review. I appreciate the time you review my poem

[Tazeen Ahmed]

That's really creative!
The way you hv described the journey of a rain drop is quite interesting!!
Keep writing 😃

[Dr. YumnaKay]

This si nice imagery here.. I liked the flow :)