My Beautiful You

It's what i call true expression of pure love, and nothing more. how the wishes and desires of the beloved holds one, how he explores the so called nuances of his love with all his heart in it.

MY BEAUTIFUL YOU

As the darkness fills the sky

aspirations in my heart arise

to embrace you tightly and never let go

i 've fallen in love with you, since i am so

so blue and deep, of such fine a kind

your eyes in always a mystery i find

they seem to ask me questions of all sorts

to reply whose answers my mind distorts

i gaze upon you as my most special thing

the true divine charm whose love i want to win

words you may fake, but feelings are true

coz you are the one, you are my beautiful you.

As the moonlight lights the sky

sweet sensations in my heart arise

to make you mine and never let go

i 've been loving you since i am so

your devil red lips take my breath away

for whose one fatal kiss i long to stay

just a feather touch of the blood red roses

may intoxicate me with the magic it encloses

i think of you as time runs through my hand

stealing my heart, my sleep and my essence

like the bliss of heaven, like the drops of dew

but beyond these all, i find my beautiful you.

as the thoughts of you run through my mind

deep emotions of my heart come alive

to stare at your forever sunshine glow

it's been the ravishing first sight, since i am so

the modesty of your cheeks, the blush of your face

your curvaceous figure and the grace of your pace

the ultimate seductive charm you 've got it too

and all a boy's fantasies, you possess 'em all do

i find you as the most enticing charm ever seen

despite of this and all, with simplicity deep within

beyond this rhyme's end, past a beginning new

i 'll love you oh! my, my beautiful you

Author's Note

Wrote it around 2010, publishing it now, but still one of my best, but please do review with harsh critical words, i 'd appreciate that.

Reviews

[Bluefire]

I like how it flows, I can read it fast like a Nightcore song, and it never truly stops until the very end.
Well done! ^^

[yash]

coz it's my beautiful....you..

[Bluefire]

Say what? O.o

[yash]

nothing, just ignore it...

[Bluefire]

Aaaaaaaaaalllrrrrrrriiiiiigggghhhty then ^^

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Very different and so Imaginary.

I loved this line.


As the moonlight lights the sky

sweet sensations in my heart arise

to make you mine and never let go

I've been loving you since I am so


you might want to cap lock some of your I's
and your I've in your sentence but wonderful
poem other then that.


Thank you for sharing this Imaginary piece.


Blessings. kindred poet

[yash]

Thanks, i 'll make sure to check these errors, and you are the first one to point out any..thanks again..

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

you're very welcome. it's my pleasure.Blessings. Kindred poet

[Bowers]

"you are my beautiful you"
I am in love with this sentence!

"I find my beautiful you"
just a beautiful.
I love your choice of words, your vocabulary is wonderful, and fully enhances the piece. A great write, much imagery, and very romantic ideas!

[yash]

well it was typical of me at some point of time back then...and i love it the same way. It's good to be able to make such an impression.