Shades of rose

Shades of rose

A Poem by behindgreeneyes65

In the early morning rise a pink sky ascends,
Train across the prairies, a landscape blends.
Steel tracks and white meadows, mother earth awaits her sun,
A new day born, another gift from God begun.







































© 2015 behindgreeneyes65


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behindgreeneyes65
I am a new writer. I write from the heart. I hope to learn from others to become a better writer. Thank you.

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Neo
There is so much imagery packed into this short poem! I can feel the sun rising and gradually shining light that sparkle on the train tracks and the meadow. There is so much new hope when a day starts out as beautifully as this one. It is truly a gift from God.
Thank you so much for sharing, and I look forward to reading more of your work. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

behindgreeneyes65

9 Years Ago

I'm touched by your comments. Thank you! I just started writing last month. I'm encouraged to post m.. read more



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I love this poem :) short but sweet well done!

Posted 9 Years Ago


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behindgreeneyes65

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much!
One of the most gorgeous, perfectly penned descriptions of any subject I have come across. Well written, friend. Can't wait to read more of your work.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

behindgreeneyes65

9 Years Ago

Wow! I don't know hot to respond to that, but say a big heartfelt thanks!!!!
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Neo
There is so much imagery packed into this short poem! I can feel the sun rising and gradually shining light that sparkle on the train tracks and the meadow. There is so much new hope when a day starts out as beautifully as this one. It is truly a gift from God.
Thank you so much for sharing, and I look forward to reading more of your work. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

behindgreeneyes65

9 Years Ago

I'm touched by your comments. Thank you! I just started writing last month. I'm encouraged to post m.. read more

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Added on February 28, 2015
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behindgreeneyes65
behindgreeneyes65

Edmonton/Winnipeg, Canada



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I'm brand new to poetry and writing in general. I've always been a fan of fictional writing, many established writer friends, was encouraged to write and so here I am in my second month with about 30 .. more..

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