On The Dot

On The Dot

A Poem by beefjerky
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somethings, when they are exact, are so amazing...

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At my school math has a placement,
The dot here is the margin of placings.
People above it,
Will go into accelerated.
People below it,
Will go into standard.
And I,
I have the exact score.
Hitting that margin
Right on.
Happened too last year.
It is like
That I don't know
Where the margin is,
But somehow I do...
WIERD...
           beefjerky
 

© 2009 beefjerky


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wierd...

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That is strange. Hmn I don't know if thats good or bad,decent poem I dig it.

Posted 15 Years Ago


Yes, weird indeed. Having the EXACT score? Is that a good thing? I want to know. Maybe you can add that into your poem, and it will come out a bit stronger.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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