life goes on

A Poem by beckyflowa

while you're unsure,

the leaves fall

while you cry,

rocks erode

while you grieve,

the earth spins

© 2015 beckyflowa

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Niall Madden

good comparison, the way you wove the individual into the collective that is nature was very good short and sweet, only I would have liked to see more.

Posted 9 Years Ago

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Added on January 17, 2015
Last Updated on January 18, 2015
Tags: life goes on, nature, poetry, teens, love, poems, life, meaning, grief, sadness, pity, regret, happiness, yay

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beckyflowa

dublin, Ireland

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hello i'm becky, i use this website as mainly a store for poems i write but please do take a look and review them, feedback would be nice:) also if you have any tips on poem or short story writing, .. more..

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