Objection Overruled

Objection Overruled

A Poem by .::Cup^E^Cake*RaWr!*::.

I feel kind of like
I've lost my touch.
When I think I've got it
I find myself stuck.

The truth is
maybe it's not what I thought.
Maybe it's more or less
than this battle I have fought.

I keep pushing and pushing
but still get nowhere.
I'm blinded by the sun,
I'm blinded by the glare.

The gun is always pointed
but the trigger never pulled.
I stand up and put my foot down,
Objection overruled.

© 2009 .::Cup^E^Cake*RaWr!*::.


Author's Note

.::Cup^E^Cake*RaWr!*::.
Nothing is perfect, Don't be too harsh please!

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As a writer I can relate, sometimes you just can't find the words you look for and the harder you try the more frustrating it gets... so just walk away till it flows again.

Posted 15 Years Ago


Such a moving work, made me feel a bit sad... The whole sense of being out of touch with life... feeling left behind... So vividly expressed!

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on April 20, 2009

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.::Cup^E^Cake*RaWr!*::.
.::Cup^E^Cake*RaWr!*::.

Somewhere I need to be down in, AR



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My Name is Rebekah but everyone calls me Beck or Beckah or my fav Cup^E^Cake & I was born in Ohio but Raised in the south. My poems are about things that really happend some where in my life weather .. more..

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