That "No Goodbye" Kind Of Kiss

Love is in the air...if only it was for me!! None the less hope you enjoy!!

I find myself

lost in who you are,

Swimming through

your every word.

Basking in your eyes,

warming up in your smile.

Please say you'll stay.

 

If you leave me now

I will search for you

just to make sure

you meant to leave me

because in my heart

I can feel

you would want me to.

Your love has to be true.

 

So kiss me now

for you can no longer deny

that in this kiss

there is no goodbye.

Author's Note

Ok yes very cheesy...very cliche' but none the less it had to be written!! Nothing is perfect,Don't be too harsh please!!

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Poem is very good. I had to read it a few times. Sometime better to hold on then try to escape. I like the ending. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Jason A. Kendrick]

there is nothing silly about this poem. it is the trivial things in life that truely make people happy. The sad part is that most people do not think about them until they are taken from you. Imagine not being able to see a tree, hear a whisper, or lift a pencil to write. All trivial and all aprreciated by me as is this poem.
A poets worst critic the the one who wrote the poem

[Mr. Lopez]

Tender and sweet
I didn't think this to be cheesy
There was much emotional depth in this one
Nice piece

Mr.Lopez

[Mr. Lopez]

Tender and sweet
I didn't think this to be cheesy
There was much emotional depth in this one
Nice piece

Mr.Lopez

[Mr. Lopez]

Tender and sweet
I didn't think this to be cheesy
There was much emotional depth in this one
Nice piece

Mr.Lopez

[Mr. Lopez]

Tender and sweet
I didn't think this to be cheesy
There was much emotional depth in this one
Nice piece

Mr.Lopez

[An owl on the moon]

I loved the depth and sweet sense and the last passage was absolute perfection:
So kiss me now
for you can no longer deny
that in this kiss
there is no goodbye.
Beautiful expression of love that lasts!

Craig

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Not really cliche... i enjoyed it... undeniable love is a wonderful thing... nicely done.

[Erin Was Here.]

Hey, nice poem! I love the flow and rhythm.
I LOVE the title. It's perfect. I also especially love the last stanza:
"So kiss me now
For you can no longer deny
That in this kiss
There is no goodbye."

nice poem.