Treat me wrong...things change

Baby I may be yours right now but don't let it go to your head.

I think you probably know by now

exactly how I feel about you.

Baby I want to know

what are you going to do?

 

Are you going to decide

you don't need me

or will you hold me tight,

will you set me free?

 

Before you think

you've got me hooked

You need to know

I can change my mind.

So don't get too cocky

or decide your mission is accomplished

because I can turn this car around.

 

Baby don't let it go to your head.

Author's Note

Nothing's perfect,Don't be too harsh please!!

Reviews

[alyssa]

I like it!!! it true sometimes it just gets to their head and they change... love it and keep writing!!

[Mr. Lopez]

Love should never be taken for granted but nurtured every day.I think thats what you are trying to say here and have done so very well. Keep up the good work.

Mr.Lopez

[An owl on the moon]

Such a painful, bitter side of love. The restless uneasiness that it could end and once more we can find ourselves alone... So sad...

Craig

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Oh that is so direct and said with such conviction... it's true you should never take advantage of the one you love when they are in your life cause it's the best way to end up alone... you should always show them everyday in little ways. Very well done.

I really like the message that you're giving in this poem. The words are simple, and they sort of work, but I don't think that it flows all that well. The positive side is that you went right out and said what you wanted to say, and that's what readers like. If things get too complicated, the reader loses interest. Good job!