Speedracer

For my friend Sammons!!

We call him speedracer.

He hops in his red sports car,

Speeding up & down the road wasting his gas

but he doesn't care because there's plenty more where that came from.

 

He comes to church

every Sunday & Wednesday

To listen & talk of

stories on the nights spent in a bigger town.

 

The girls all want him,

He knows it.

At times I can see his head swelling

as he thinks he's superman

sitting in his bearded recliner

that was once hid from him...

in a shower.

 

He has two personalities,

Too cool for school

& nerdy enough to chill with me

& my crew.

 

He's the same as everyone else yet still an individual.

 

He's speedracer.

Author's Note

Nothing's perfect,Don't be too harsh please.

Reviews

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Yes and nobody is perfect as well... nicely done

He has two personalities,
Too cool for school
& nerdy enough to chill with me
& my crew.

those lines are awesome as you show that we all have more then one side.

[Michael Carr]

I enjoy it. a bit rushed near the end, would still want a bit more about the character. but the piece is smooth, breezy, and really quite sweet.
well done.

yeah I'm speedracer.
except the part about the car or the girls.
huh... :)