Love Me Not

Love Me Not

A Poem by .::Cup^E^Cake*RaWr!*::.
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About something from the past that has yet again came up...ugh I don't feel good so I have to write about this feeling.

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I'm not sure what to think after all this time.

It's been so long,

I'm over it but you don't seem to be.

 

I'm not sure what you want from me,

I can't just love you when I don't anymore.

I'm so confused about everything

having to do with you.

 

I've changed so much.

I don't think you see it at all.

 

I feel so sick every time your name comes up,

especially when you're trying to talk to me,

I don't even know why I feel sick but I do.

 

You try to ignore me when I say that I'm over you

as if it never came out of my mouth,

as if we're still together.

 

I just want you to move on

so I won't have to feel this way.

Is it too much to ask of you

to love me not?

© 2008 .::Cup^E^Cake*RaWr!*::.


Author's Note

.::Cup^E^Cake*RaWr!*::.
Ignore grammer & spelling.
Don't be too harsh I know it's not perfect,I didn't want it to be I wrote it for me not to please you.

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Very nicely done... sometimes we can find that person that broke our heart wasn't what we needed and i love that about this piece as you boldly display how your feelings have change, the last line real ended it with the punch it needed.

Posted 16 Years Ago


well I think it's perfectly fine. Your writings always speak to me well.
I read poetry better when it has rhythm so I had a few issues
but, nevertheless, I did enjoy it. Kudos, chika.
All poetry is perfect when it comes from the heart.

Peace, Love, & Butterflies
~Kalisa Rachelle

Posted 16 Years Ago



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My Name is Rebekah but everyone calls me Beck or Beckah or my fav Cup^E^Cake & I was born in Ohio but Raised in the south. My poems are about things that really happend some where in my life weather .. more..

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