Monster

Monster

A Poem by .::Cup^E^Cake*RaWr!*::.
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Totaly fiction but I wanted to write about something I haven't written about before so here it is.

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So what if I did it?

I heard he had no heart.

I believed them.

I don't think he cared at all

So he probably wanted to go anyways.

I helped him.

I didn't know him

But I heard he was stupid.

I believed them.

He knew nothing at all.

He probably wanted to go

So I helped him.

 

 

Everyone looks at me as if I'm some sort of a monster,

I only killed a man.

It's no big deal.

I think they wish I were the one that died though.

 

 

I heard he had no family.

I believed them.

He probably wanted to die.

He had no family anyways,

So I helped him.

I heard he had no home.

I believed them.

If he had no home he was probably miserable.

So I helped him.

 

 

Ok now its getting inconvenient for me.

Everyone's outcasting me from everything.

How am I to live like this?

 

Maybe they're right.

Maybe I am a monster,

But the good kind right?

 

What the hell is wrong with everyone?

I'm not that bad!

 

I'm laying on the merry go 'round at the park.
I'm spinning looking at the sky & some freak comes up with a gun shouting I killed his brother.

But he didn't have a family...right?

Boom the gun fires right into my chest but doesn't hit my heart.

I'm bleeding really bad though & everyhting is fading.

I think I'm dying.

Damn this hurts.

 

I was a monster.

 

© 2008 .::Cup^E^Cake*RaWr!*::.


Author's Note

.::Cup^E^Cake*RaWr!*::.
Just a little soemthing different!

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i love it!! i felt the pain that the person felt... it was difrent to... thats what i liked about it!!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


i totally agree with Anarda Nashai,
it is something different! and i luhvvvv it!
ur a great writer and this was a great write!
you always do a great job!
keep writing

Luhv
~Ashley A.

Posted 16 Years Ago


It is different, and I like it. You're very descriptive but you also keep it simple. It's hard sometimes to keep that balance, but as usual you do a great job!

Posted 16 Years Ago


Wow! This is different and I really liked it! I was captured
the whole way through. And it was very well written.
Really excellent poem and I say again, quite different!

Tina

Posted 16 Years Ago


WOW...I was really moved by this. Great way to comment on the duality of mankind (the good and evil that we are all capable of, no matter the reason, whether it's justified or not). Love, love, LOVE this!!!!! Can't wait to read more of your poetry!!!

-Anarda Nashai
author of Despondent
Check out my website at:
www.anardanashai.webs.com

Posted 16 Years Ago



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My Name is Rebekah but everyone calls me Beck or Beckah or my fav Cup^E^Cake & I was born in Ohio but Raised in the south. My poems are about things that really happend some where in my life weather .. more..

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