Music

Music

A Poem by .::Cup^E^Cake*RaWr!*::.
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I love music!!

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Music in my arms & feet.

Music in my heart.

Music makes me feel the beat.

Is there such thing as music smart?

 

When I feel the music's notes,

Wiggling in my ears.

When I think about the words,

It takes away my fears.

 

Music makes me wanna dance,

As if no ones around.

I see everything in a single glance,

When I hear that sound.

 

Music helps me make it through,

When I feel there's no way out,

When I don't know what to do,

Music makes me shout.

© 2008 .::Cup^E^Cake*RaWr!*::.


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I love music too.....i always blast loud music in my car :D great piece

Posted 15 Years Ago


Rich and wild and wonderful!!! I can't go a minute without my music so I can SO relate to this piece... Thank you!!!

Craig

Posted 16 Years Ago


OH MY FRIGGIN LORD! I am listening to one of my favorite alblums right now, and my favorite song on said alblum was playing when I read this. It sent serious shivers. Plus, your sense stress, rhyme, rhythem and imagery are simple, beautiful and absolutely perfect! I truely adore this poem. I identify with each of your poems, but this one is top five, without a doubt. Hugs sweetness!

Posted 16 Years Ago


This is a fun poem and well written. The rhyme scheme gives your poem a nice flow. As a musician , I know the power of the music. It can cure your pain and lift up your soul and be a friend for life. Great Job.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Woo Hoo! Keep boogy-Oogyin. I know what you mean, about music helping you make it through.

Posted 16 Years Ago


This was cute. You made it into your own sound of the music type of thing. Well written!

Much love n respect,
Anna

Posted 16 Years Ago


I like this, it's like I say... What's life without a sound track??

Posted 16 Years Ago


this poem is what goes through my brain every second. i cant stop the flow of musical rhythm within my mind. great work.

Posted 16 Years Ago


I saw the title 'Music' and I had to read, ha. I definitely appreciate your adoration of music. I love walking down the street and just catching the rhythm of the environment ... pretty much related. Nice.

Posted 16 Years Ago


i love music :)

Posted 16 Years Ago



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My Name is Rebekah but everyone calls me Beck or Beckah or my fav Cup^E^Cake & I was born in Ohio but Raised in the south. My poems are about things that really happend some where in my life weather .. more..

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