The Storm

This is random & about a bunch of defferent things

The storm is rolling in,

I'm pulling these words from the pain within.

 

As I see the lightning,

It reminds me of you,

The electricity & devastation,

Of all the things you do.

 

The flood of the down poor,

Reminds me of all the tears I cried,

All the times you shut the door,

In my face.

 

The hail reminds me of the coldness

Of your heart,

The way you didn't care,

That you made me fall apart.

 

The tornado reminds me of the wind,

That blew the word "us" away for good.,

Because you didn't stand up for me,

Even though you always said you would.

 

The storm reminds me of the devastation all together,

That you left behind you,

& all the things you said you would,

That you didn't do.

Reviews

[ANNA]

You did something different here and its amazing to see that we have people like you that can write bleeding pain in so many ways. You show that girl! Wow, I was blow away by your tornado of words. Felt the deep electricity running into my heart to give me a jump start, I needed some kind of flood to wash away all the emotion you just gave to me by reading this my dare!!! Beauty in your writings! Pure beauty!!!

Keep it up, I can't wait to read more!!

Much love n respect,
Anna

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I hear you on this one, I've had relationships with many devasating storms... I couldn't have desribe it better myself... fantastic work.

[Deanarrlack]

Of the stuff I read, I like this the most. It seems to be the most creative however could still use work around the edges.

[kitty_kelley]

Seriously good shtuff's Beck. :)

[Wildfleour]

I'm sending you an email...........

:)