Wronge

This is about my unknown feelings I have for a guy.

So I'm thinking I might like you a little,

But that my feelings are wrong.

There are too many things holding me back,

The list is too long.

 

So what is a girl to do,

When she can't block those thoughts out?

I often wonder what I can do,

I've even tried to shout.

 

I'm really not even sure,

What it is you do,

Maybe it's just all the Small things,

That you do.

 

Please don't look at me that way,

So maybe I'll forget.

Please don't leave me not knowing what to say,

So maybe I'll forget all about it.

 

I'm not sure what you think of me,

That's why I don't say much.

Even though as I'm watching you,

I'm wanting to feel your touch.

 

So please tell me what you want,

So I know what to do.

I already know what i want,

Even though i deny it's you.

 

I feel this feeling is so wrong,

But if it's so wrong why would I feel this way?

I don't know what to do,

I don't know what to say.

 

I think I'm going to chill & wait & see.

Anything could happen,

But I doubt you'll ever want me.

 

So I'll try to forget once more,

Every time I hear your voice,

I'll try to ignore.

 

I'll try to think nothing of it,

Every time you hold the door.

 

I'll try to ignore it when you look me in the eyes for long,

Because these feelings are wrong.

Reviews

[Sarah Erickson]

Very nicely written! This really has a very universal quality in that I think a lot of people can really relate to what you're saying. This is especially so in the last few stanzas, particulary "Anything could happen, / But I doubt you'll ever want me" and entire stanza following that. I think you did the rhyming very well. I think a lot of writers' rhyming comes off as very forced and rather fake-sounding, but in this poem, it comes off as very natural.

[Lyndsay Castro]

This isn't my favorite poem of yours. But you do show a great deal of poise here, which I think is essencial for poetry [sometimes].

[Reborn A Phoenix]

wow i loved it lots i really did it is really good

[Noah]

i love how it applies to everyone- a very natural look at how we all feel - loved it ;P