Sometimes

This is supposed to be inspirational.

Sometimes it hurts more to hold on
Than it dose to let go.
Sometimes u have to take a chance
Or u’ll never know.

Sometimes u look all over for love
When it’s right under your nose
Sometimes u try to hide your pain
But it really still shows.

Sometimes u want to be alone when everyone’s around.
Sometimes u want to be near someone but no one hears a sound.
Sometimes u smile when u wanna cry.
But it always hurts to say goodbye.

Trust the one’s that trust u but no one else.
Don’t ever walk on egg shells,
Not for someone who dose not care,
Because in the end they won’t be there.

If your heart is broken don’t regret,
What once made u happy,
Even when your stuck in a net.

Believe in what u feel is right
I believe in Jesus
For if I leave this earth tonight
I won’t be left in pieces.

Live life to the fullest,
Laugh till u cry,
Tell your self your the coolest
For one day we all will die.

Everything happens for a reason so take it as it is.
Never let go of that very first kiss.
For one day u’ll look back & still smile.
Even though it’s been a while.

Trust my words for this is true,
No one will ever be like u!

 

 

~Rebekah M. Darby~

Reviews

[Lyndsay Castro]

I love it! I think your work is good enough to stand on it's own, without "tricks" like u instead of you. But that's just what I think, and I understand that it's your style. And you should always write in your style. But I really like your work. It's simple but still mature.

[Life Inside Death]

This is something that I could say is probably the exact opposite of what I would write.
The ending was cute, though, and somehow I liked this poem.

Sometimes u want to be alone when everyone's around.
Sometimes u want to be near someone but no one hears a sound.
Sometimes u smile when u wanna cry.
But it always hurts to say goodbye.

That's so true...
Good write.