The Darkness

The Darkness

A Poem by beccagarcia
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This is a poem

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I'm living in a world that i cant get out of

im trapped

I cant unlock my feet from these chains

please?

someone help me

I want out of this crazy world

I want god or someone to save me

please?

HELP!!

© 2013 beccagarcia


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I once was like this. Im so glad that there is hope for the hopeless. Nice expression of thought captured here. Welcome my friend :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


great job, i love the power behind this piece, you seem to have a lot of potential and i cannot wait to see what else you can come up with. message me anytime about anything, i'm here to help:)

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on January 4, 2013
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beccagarcia
beccagarcia

Greenfield, IN



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