You don't need to say anythin, I understand

"you shouldn't be ashamed"

but it was me that was blamed

maybe it was me

i was still standing like a tree

blowing on my hair

there i stood bare

 

as i grew, i knew

this should never happen to you

but if it does you can say

it doesn't have to stay this way

 

i survived i'm alive!

all alone in this place

life's such not a prity face

i couldn't die i had to cry

 

all alone in this house

their the cat and i'm the mouse

i couldn't die i had to cry

 

all alone in this life

one day i'd like to be a wife

i couldn't die i had to cry

 

but now more years have turned

there's more in life i've learned

and now we must stand strong

cause what was done was wrong

i survived i'm alive

 

it shouldnt have had to end this way

like the cat that chased its pray to society is a stray

nothing to be said conversation is dead

 

you're strong not wrong

take prime and time

just walk don't talk

and you'll see life is free

 

but thats all you ment to me

and as the days go by

i will still sit here and cry

 

waiting for mor time to pass

as i'm looking through the hour glass

thinking what could i do to help

Reviews

[Leslie Philibert]

Like the internal rhymes , strong and wrong and the nifty couplets.I like all poems that are real, you wrote this because you`ve got something to say. Well done.
I bet you`ve got a good English teacher too.

[Cyrano]

I feel like i know what the poems about but i wont assume because the fact is even without knowing for sure what it is i can still feel the emotion of the effect. I like the Cat and Mouse theme it gives me a sense of persecution. besides grammar errors its a great write as is, yet id love to see you develop it into a masterpiece.

[Hello, Goodbye]

concept and intention are verifiable and well explored.

[Dahlia Phoenix]

You have a few grammar errors but this poem is brilliant for the sheer understanding of taking what the other person has to say. Great piece.