Alone

Sitting all alone

Lots to decide

 

Thinking about my life

Not a lot's right

 

But should I let it

Stop me going on...

 

Maybe yes

And maybe no

 

Either way

I'll never know

Reviews

[-Scribe in Style-]

Sometimes ones gotta do the best they can on their own.
Thank you

[Dahlia Phoenix]

I agree with Chris on this one. Insightful truly! The simplicity of this poem is almost crying out to let itself be heard through the loneliness. Great piece.

Its almost a song I can hear the Pixies singing :) very nice

[Helpless]

great ending, sums it up to a perfect point! nice work!

[Samantha Heaton]

I love the flow of this good job!

[TJ]

Love this Becca! I like pieces of brevity bc they test the author's ability to pack much power into few words. You succeeded

[Brytt]

^^

(I died! It's perfect!)