Haiku

Haiku

A Poem by BeccaB

Eureka! yelled the girl

Stillness is boring

Meditation is different

© 2011 BeccaB


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This really doesn't make much sense, and seems kind of like you wanting to be something your not.
No offense, you're a fantastic writer, but I have no idea what you're trying to portray in this piece. I've sat in this for a lone time, but I still don't truely understand what you're trying to say.
Maybe I'm really shallow-minded, or maybe you just need to try again?

Posted 13 Years Ago


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TJ
Short a syllable on the first line but it's still awesome

Posted 13 Years Ago


Yes!! Tremendously dug this one! :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


6, 5, 7. Short one in the first line. Change girl to woman, maybe?

Otherwise, Great haiku. I totally agree with the message. Being the same all the time, stillness? It is boring. But meditation IS different: you are searching inside to change. Right? It looks still and boring, but there's like an epic adventure inside...

Posted 13 Years Ago



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BeccaB
BeccaB

Darlington, County Durham, United Kingdom



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