WIll i go ?

WIll i go ?

A Poem by BeccaB
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a pice about desiddion making and how it effects a young minde

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Will I go?

Or will i stay?

 

I'll think about it

Another day

 

For when i decide

I'll surely tell

 

As being undecided

Is purely hell

© 2011 BeccaB


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surely

There are TONS of simple spelling errors and grammatical mistakes that you need to go back and fix. :) But your idea is well-rounded.

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Posted 13 Years Ago


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BeccaB
BeccaB

Darlington, County Durham, United Kingdom



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